英语短文改错,请帮帮我把这篇改一下错,每行有一个
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英语短文改错,请帮帮我把这篇改一下错,每行有一个
Dear Editor,
In order to make my parents happy,I never went to
Internet bars, dancing halls or other crowding places.
I like reading book or doing my homework
at home while listening music. But during every winter
holiday,my home just becomes a playroom.many relatives
get here to play the cards.I am very tired
of the noise the game makes,and my parents
enjoy it.How I long for a quietly place to read
books or learn somthing that they cannot get at
school without being diaturbed !Please helps me!
答
Dear Editor,In order to make my parents happy,I never went to went -> goInternet bars, dancing halls or other crowding places.crowding -> crowdedI like reading book or doing my homework ...