英语短文改错,请帮帮我把这篇改一下错,每行有一个

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英语短文改错,请帮帮我把这篇改一下错,每行有一个
Dear Editor,
In order to make my parents happy,I never went to
Internet bars, dancing halls or other crowding places.
I like reading book or doing my homework
at home while listening music. But during every winter
holiday,my home just becomes a playroom.many relatives
get here to play the cards.I am very tired
of the noise the game makes,and my parents
enjoy it.How I long for a quietly place to read
books or learn somthing that they cannot get at
school without being diaturbed !Please helps me!

Dear Editor,In order to make my parents happy,I never went to went -> goInternet bars, dancing halls or other crowding places.crowding -> crowdedI like reading book or doing my homework ...