雅思大作文 谁来帮我改改 都错在哪儿

雅思大作文 谁来帮我改改 都错在哪儿
雅思大作文
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Schoolingis almost the mostimportance part of children’s growing up.A topic is being discussed by so the general public is that which can decidecourse content for children.
Some people think that pupils have the right to decideall kinds of lessons’ content they want.Individualstudents have different personalities.So students can not be attracted by certain curriculum and give up to attend the lecture if they don’t like it.Soit also can limits pupils’ potential and leadto lose their confidence,because there arenothing attractive and can be challenged during the class.
Others think,whatever,the government should make decision about content of lecture.Because government’sdecision is more scientific and objective,students’ personal management frequently is not enough strong and theycan make the certain class disappear which is unwelcome if they can choose classes as their wishes.Additionally,educationist will design more perfect decision to adopt to schooling.Amongthese,ministry of education also play a the mostimportant role.
My own view is that the government decision is helpful for schooling; however educationists should acquire pupils’ wishes increasingly.As for students,they need to reflect education questions in time to related ministry.Simultaneously,they should try to preferably plan their time for studying study and rest.Only in this way canhelp students to study more efficiently.