用be going to 写一篇短文

用be going to 写一篇短文
用通知方式最恰当,文章中的be going to 也可以换成will来用.
英语通知（Attention）
Outing 郊游
Attention, please! Boys and girls, I have something to tell you. Our class is going togo to the People’s Park for an outing on May 16th,Saturday. In the morning, we are going to visit the East Lake.Weare going to have a picnic by the lake at noon. Girls are going to sing and dance if they would like.After that, we are going to visit the South Garden. Please wear your sports shoes, and take your lunch and drinks with you. If It's possible, each group is going to take a couple of cameras along so that youare going to take some pictures o f the beautiful sights. We are to meet at the school gate at 6∶50 a.m. The buses are going to start at 7∶00 a.m. Don’t be late.
Class Four ,Grade Seven谢谢，不过老师要求写短文救救我吧好，马上就改过来看看这里：就成了生活安排、打算。Our class is going togo to the People’s Park for an outing on May 16th,Saturday. In the morning, we are going to visit the East Lake.Weare going to have a picnic by the lake at noon. Girls are going to sing and dance if they would like.After that, we are going to visit the South Garden. Please wear your sports shoes, and take your lunch and drinks with you. If It's possible, each group is going to take a couple of cameras along so that youare going to take some pictures o f the beautiful sights. We are to meet at the school gate at 6∶50 a.m. The buses are going to start at 7∶00 a.m. Don’t be late.人称I、you、he、she都用上了么，这是老师的要求