求两篇短文改错,每篇有10处错

求两篇短文改错,每篇有10处错
A：My cousin and I usually stay out late with some friends on Saturday evenings,left Grandpa alone at home.It was so cold yesterday,however,that none of us wanted to suffer from the frozen wind outside.So after dinner we stay at home sitting around a fire and listening to Grandpa tell his experiences in Second Word War.In fact they sounded familiar to us,so we were still listening attentively so as to make him be happy.Now and then we asked Grandpa some questions,that he answered in a humorous way.We burst out laughing from time and time and he laughed too.Full of joy,we all felt especially warm in the cold evening.
B:Dear Tom,
Although I'm16 years old,but my father still treats me as a careless children.He doesn't value my opinions.
He is very strict with me and often punishes me about leaving things lying around in the house when he did this all time.I think he fails to set an example for me to follow.But he often says:"Doing as I say , not as I do ."
More worse ,he points out my past mistakes to guests,making me feel hurting .I love my father ,but I can't bear what he does . I have been tried many times to talk with him and he never listens.Please help me .
如果有单词上的拼写错误是本人手残,不算在内.积分不够给不了太多,抱歉哦