检查一下英语演讲稿有没有语法错误I hope our study will be more funnyIn Chinese class,you will always see such a scene.A teacher,holding chalk,facing the blackboard,ever writes a lot of words.The students holding pens,look at the blackboard,but the teacher is still endless to speak.Whatever the subject,the teacher is always the protagonist of the classroom,students have only blindly accepted.After the lesson,the students take notes and exercise books will be hold on th

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检查一下英语演讲稿有没有语法错误
I hope our study will be more funny
In Chinese class,you will always see such a scene.A teacher,holding chalk,facing the blackboard,ever writes a lot of words.The students holding pens,look at the blackboard,but the teacher is still endless to speak.Whatever the subject,the teacher is always the protagonist of the classroom,students have only blindly accepted.After the lesson,the students take notes and exercise books will be hold on their hands at all.The final scores only depends in your memory.
We increasingly can not accept this approach to learning,we will become a learning machine.We learn a great deal of knowledge,but do not know how to use it in our lives; we are good at listening; but not good at expressing our views; we can study well,but we can’t live very well.
So I hope that our class would be a stage of exchanging our ideas.Teachers may not give the lesson alone and could communicate with students.Besides,I hope that teachers could also take part in activities.The classmates can compete with each other and get along well with each other.I expect that our school life would have more fun and make everyone enjoy the class.That is my hope.
请检查一下语法,并纠正,好的追分,今天!
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改动如下:I hope our study will be more funny.In Chinese classes, you will always see such a scene:A teacher, holding a chalk, facing the blackboard, is busy writing down a lot of words. His or her stu...