英语句子检查
问题描述：
英语句子检查
In the middle of the picture sit a multitude of people,communicating with others by computer,which are used widely in mondern society.To our surprise,they pay more attention on the tools to contact lateral person.
答
In the middle of the picture sit a multitude of people,
改成:a multitude of people sit in the middle of the picture.
communicating with others by computer,which are used widely in mondern society.
改成:communicating with others by computers,
they pay more attention on the tools to contact lateral person.
改成they pay more attention to the tools contacting lateral persons(or people).