Everyone will face all hinks of trouble,smart as he ais,it coudn't be avoided,but life is full of hopeful things,one of
Everyone will face all hinks of trouble,smart as he ais,it coudn't be avoided,but life is full of hopeful things,one of which is your friends' encouragement.
when I was in a primary school,I used to finishing all things without any tips or encouragement ,but every times Icould deal with them easily.Increasing confidence cavsed an embarrised that I was choosed to sing at class with my voice was striked by cold.I only standed and didn't know what could I do.Thanks
to the encouragement from my teacher,finally,we sangthe song together and got close to each other.
In fact,no one can live in the world with himself.everyone is associated with others ,Encaragement from the group can offer you with energy all the time,As is
known to all of us,combine is power,isn't it?
1.第一段的第一行 应为 all kinds of 2.第二段第一行 应为 used to finish ,第二行every times 应为 every time,increasing 改为increased,第三行choosed改为 chosen .with 改为 while.表示转折.striked 改为struck ...能得几分啊，高手，在高三还需要怎样努力呢？这样的话 改错题10分应该都能拿到手。你现在高三啊？ 呵呵，努力。望采纳哦。如果需要什么帮助，you can ask me for help.