英语作文找错（查看是否正确）
英语作文找错（查看是否正确）
"We see the fire in the sky,we feel the beating of our hearts
together." I love this song very much.Yes,the world needs our love.In this world,many people need our love,like the homeless people,the old people,the sick people,the hungry people,the street children and so on .So we should give help to those people.Although one person`s energy is small.the energy we all give is large So let us understand"Hand in hand we can ,all across the land ,we can make this world a better place for us to live." If everyone give his/her a bit of love,the world will be a beautiful family!
,like the homeless people（the+形容词表示一类人,可以在此处删掉people也没问题的,而且这样你后面的用词也不会一直有people,people这样的重复哦）,the old people（删掉people）,the sick people（删掉people）,th...