请忙帮修改一下 英语短文my name is .,and i am 22 years old.i am from china.but now i am live in seoul alone.i have been living in korea for two years.i am a sophomore at konkuk university.i am majoring in international trade .i like study english.but it is really difficylt to me i like to read and play computergames .so i stay at home during the weekend 请帮我再添加几句话 中间或末尾 3q 3q~^^请再帮我加几句话~o(∩_∩)o

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请忙帮修改一下 英语短文
my name is .,and i am 22 years old.i am from china.but now i am live in seoul alone.
i have been living in korea for two years.
i am a sophomore at konkuk university.i am majoring in international trade .i like study english.but it is really difficylt to me
i like to read and play computergames .so i stay at home during the weekend
请帮我再添加几句话 中间或末尾 3q 3q~^^
请再帮我加几句话~o(∩_∩)o

my name is..., and i am 22 years old. i am from china but now i live in seoul alone. i have been living in korea since two years ago.
i am a sophomore at konkuk university. my major is international trade. i like studying english but, to be frank, it's really a little difficult for me.
i like to read and play computergames, which is main reason that why i always stay at home during the weekend. however, making friends from all over the world is one of my hobbies, you know by writing emails or direct talk via some internet softwares like MSN, skype etc.
这是一篇写得不怎么好的简单小文,主要是第一人称 I 用得太多,小作者可以尝试少用I做主语!

sometimes I go to the bookstore to buy some books.And I writing is very good.
i have a lot of habits reading and playing computer games is one of my favourite i also like seeing movies

my name is .,and i am 22 years old.i am from china.Now (but now 换成Now) i am (live去掉) in Seoul alone.
i have been (living去掉) in korea for two years.
i am a sophomore (这个单词我没怎么见过,查了才知道) at konkuk university.i am majoring in international trade .i want to (like换成want to) learn english.but it is really difficylt for (to改for) me
i like reading books (加books) and playing computergames and i also like to stay at home during the weekends

My name is .... , and I am 22 years old. I am from china. But I am live in seoul alone now.
I have been living in korea for two years.
I am a sophomore at konkuk university. I am majoring in international trade .I like studing English , but it is really difficult to me .
I like to read and play computer games.so I sometimes stay at home during the weekend and sometimes I go to the bookstore to buy some books.And I writing is very good.
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