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PO Box 571
KENT TOWN
SA 5071
29 March 2010
The Rt Hon The Lord Mayer
Michael Harbison
ADELAIDE TOWN HALL
128 King William St
SA 5001
Dear Sir,
Thank you for inviting me to attend such a fun international student party. It is my honour to attend this party at Adelaide Town Hall King William Street on Friday night.
At the beginning I was not expecting to enjoy the foods, but your quiche, sausage rolls and little pies certainly surpassed my expectations! It was a great time with friends and girls. The euphonious music and fantastic performance are really surprised me.The skilful pianist on grand piano and Kola are all the shining point.Mr Harbison gave a speech with a humorous anecdote. And the Indian dancer with his unbelievable dancing skills deserve our of us a burst into applause
There is also a couple of things need to be improve, the party is for the international student, so there should supply some of the Asian food, such as noodles, tea, sushi.The party also should play some games to make everyone knew each other, not just talk with the schoolmates.However, I think the party place is not appropriate and it is too far from many schools, maybe supply a party bus, it could easily solve the problem.
Your Faithfully