i know that in many areas in the west ,children are in need of help. 后一句能不能换成,

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i know that in many areas in the west ,children are in need of help. 后一句能不能换成,
childrenneed some help.

语法上可以,但语气就变了;文中强调的是孩子需要帮助;改后语气弱了很多