帮忙分析语法有无错误?急.I wish that I would take a trip around the world some day.

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帮忙分析语法有无错误?急.
I wish that I would take a trip around the world some day.

someday连起来,对的

应该是没问题的

如果说的是想要实现的梦想宜用 hope不宜用 wishI hope I will take a trip around the world some day.原句没语法没有问题但wish后接上that subject + verb...的意思是指不能实现的事情所以祝福别人用了wish句子结构...

有,day后要加s,而且在some days之前加个介词 比如说in。