请帮我看一下一句英语的语法The old man hunched forward.His head tilted at an angle.His eyes half closed,looking very sleepy.可以改成The old man hunched forward.,with his head tilted at an angle and eyes half closed,looking very sleeping.这样可以么?looking very sleeping对吗?

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请帮我看一下一句英语的语法
The old man hunched forward.His head tilted at an angle.His eyes half closed,looking very sleepy.
可以改成The old man hunched forward.,with his head tilted at an angle and eyes half closed,looking very sleeping.
这样可以么?looking very sleeping对吗?

他是被你看到很“sleepy”,应改成looked very sleepy

应该对的,你可以借助金山词霸查一下

sleepy不用改,looking very sleepy是伴随状语

错误,不能说look sleeping
look ”看上去怎么样”
接状语,不能接动名词