when i came back to dongguan,i will call you

问题描述:

when i came back to dongguan,i will call you

当我回到东莞的时候,我会CALL你。

我回东莞后就给你打电话

这个句子有语病啊

等我回东莞后就给你打电话

当我回东莞时,我会给你打电话的.