检查语法和时态错误we came to beijing at octorber 28 2008.we have lived in the house of my aunt from octorber 2008 to july 2009.then we moved into our new home till now.

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检查语法和时态错误
we came to beijing at octorber 28 2008.we have lived in the house of my aunt from octorber 2008 to july 2009.then we moved into our new home till now.

on October 28 不是指某一天么怎么用了at?
We had lived .......用过去完成时
还有大小写什么的是你打字的疏忽吧,就不算了

We came to beijing at Octorber 28 2008. We had lived in the house of my aunt's from Octorber 2008 to July 2009. Then we had moved into our new home. Now I am living in it.
(or: Now we have been living in our new home. )

里面的现在完成时不对,应用过去完成时!we came to beijing at octorber 28 2008.we had lived in the house of my aunt from octorber 2008 to july 2009.then we moved into our new home and have lived till now....

we had lived in the house......