这样表述对吗?This certificate is awarded the first prize of Mary in the **contest.这句话有错吗?

问题描述:

这样表述对吗?This certificate is awarded the first prize of Mary in the **contest.
这句话有错吗?

This first prize certificate is awarded to Mary for winning the contest.

不对.
The first prize certificate is awarded to Mary in the xx contest.

This certificate is awarded to Mary for her win in the **contest .
award 后面只能接人