短文改错,下面短文中有十处语言错误there was a time when zhang yi and i was good friends,正文there was a time when zhang yi and i was good friends,but now we are like stranger.on his fiest day in our class two years ago,he had no one to take.i was the first one to say hello to her,so we became feiends.zhang yi did well in math or he was always ready to helping me with it.one day last month,i told him ahout that i would be away from school for two days to see a friends.bu

短文改错,下面短文中有十处语言错误there was a time when zhang yi and i was good friends,
正文
there was a time when zhang yi and i was good friends,but now we are like stranger.on his fiest day in our class two years ago,he had no one to take.i was the first one to say hello to her,so we became feiends.zhang yi did well in math or he was always ready to helping me with it.one day last month,i told him ahout that i would be away from school for two days to see a friends.but he told my father about it and that made me angrily.now,i know i was wrong.i decide to say sorry for him,because i do not want to lose so a good friends