i am thirsty very much .Can i have another bottle of orange,please?对吗?

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i am thirsty very much .Can i have another bottle of orange,please?对吗?

another 改 other

不对,i'm very thirsty 一般very much 是形容动词,很少用在BE动词形式

orange后面加一个juice,意思表达得能够更清楚一些
can可以改为may,语气更加礼貌,客气
I am thirsty very much. May I have another bottle of orange juice,please.

我没有看出错误来
不过是不是can换成could更好

很少说i am thirsty very much
一般就直接是 I'm very thirsty.
一般问别人要什么的时候,语气委婉,可以说Could/May I have...

这句话是对的。如果出于礼貌,可以把Can 改成could,但是原句是可以的。

i am very thirsty, can i have another bottle of orange?

i am very thirsty,can i have another bottle of orange?

对··
但是最好用 another one
因为你这样说 说明前面已经出现过orange了 为了不重复还是用 one代替好