When Mr.Davied retired,he bought a small house in a village near the sea

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When Mr.Davied retired,he bought a small house in a village near the sea

退休后,大卫先生在海边村落买了个小房子。
个人感觉这样比较好。符合汉语表达习惯。

当大卫先生退休的时候,他买了一幢接近海边的小房子。

大卫先生退休之后,在海边的一个乡村买了一栋小房子.