帮我修改一下英语作文,改成过去式Yesterday,we visited the island of Bali silver and gold,we play on the beach,also side combing,came to the small island canoeing,playing shoot the ball,eat seafood,afternoon,i also visited the fascinating underwater world,was lovely clown fish.We sat in the boat to see the sunset,was really pretty terrific这里有些过去式还没该过来,帮我改一下,还有什么意见写一写,可能有些语句不通顺!请写明你的学历，

Yesterday,we visited the island of Bali silver and gold,we played on the beach , also side combing,came to the small islang canoeing,playing shoot the ball,ate seafood.Yesterday afternoon ,i also visited the fascinating underwater world,was lovely clown fish.We sat sat in the boat to see the sunset,and that was really pretty terrific.There are a lot of places of inerest.Yesterday was a happy day,i think.
我是小学毕业的,仅管有的单词看不懂,但是还是把过去式和一些语句改了改,建议你以后多注意结尾 !

Yesterday, we visited the island of Bali Silver and Gold, we played on the beach,I also sided combing, came to the small island canoeing, played shoot the ball, eat sea food,in the afternoon,I also visited the fascinating underwater world,had lovely clown fish.We sat in the boat to see the sunset, was really pretty.
^.^ 我就是小学6年级的

Yesterday,we visited the island of Bali silver and gold ,we played on the beach,also side combing,came to the small island canoeing,playing shoot the ball,ate seafood.Afternoon,i also visited the fasc...

现在不就是过去式
吗