题目是“FIGHT AGAINST POLLUTION”看一下这段英语作文,再多写一两句话,Nature and Technology have brought about so many changes of environment.In order to protect the Earth,we must stop and pay close attention to what it is that we are doing.There is noise pollution,water pollution around us.Home energy accounts for 21 percent of global warming pollution.We should make some smart choices to fight against pollution.

改：we must pay close attention to what we are doing.
加：Effective measures must be taken to stop the increasingly serious pollution. If every citizen becomes a pollution fighter, the earth will surely be a great place to live.

Nowadays environment have been changed by the developing technology.In order to protect the environment of earth,we must stop to think about what we are doing these years.pollution exists everywhere,such as noise pollution,water pollution.They are all aroud us.If we want to have a better life with a good health,I think we should stop polluting waste things.Home energy(?什么意思)accounts for 21percent of global warming pollution.we should make some smart choices to fight against pollution,for example,we could make some policies to refrain the quantities of pollution.