What is wrong with the sentence?Time is like water,always keeps silence.If you are well,my life is full of sunshine.
问题描述：
What is wrong with the sentence?
Time is like water,always keeps silence.If you are well,my life is full of sunshine.
答
前一句似乎有两个谓语成分，应该将其改为从句；另外，应该是keep silent。如：
Time is like water which always keep silent. Time always keep silent like water.
后一句为应为：If you are well, my life will be full of sunshine.
答
Time is like water, which always keeps silence. If you are well, my life will be full of sunshine.
时光如水，总是无言。你若安好，便是晴天。
is---will
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答
此处有两处错误
①always前面要加一个连接词【and】理由：英语中两个独立的句子不能直接连接,需要一个连接词才行.
②my life 【will】 be full of 理由前一句是一个条件状语从句是一般现在式,主句要用一般将来式.
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答
如果不是谚语的话，应该是keeps in silence，will be full of吧