Hello,everybody!My Chinese name is Xie AiLing,and my English name is Tina.I'm from ZiYang.Today is September the nineteen th,Today is Monday and a nice day,I'm very happy.I'm 12 years old and my birthday is November the nine th.I study in the CHENGDU EXPERIMENTAL FOREIGN LANGUAGES SCHOOL WEST CAMPUS,Grade1,Class1B.I like dogs,I like to eat lolipop.Now,I'm telling a joke to you,It's very short.首先求个初一新生一般都听得懂的很简短的笑话然后,帮忙修改一下我上面那段英文,主要修改,语法错误,用词错误,还有,能用更
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Hello,everybody!My Chinese name is Xie AiLing,and my English name is Tina.I'm from ZiYang.Today is September the nineteen th,Today is Monday and a nice day,I'm very happy.I'm 12 years old and my birthday is November the nine th.I study in the CHENGDU EXPERIMENTAL FOREIGN LANGUAGES SCHOOL WEST CAMPUS,Grade1,Class1B.I like dogs,I like to eat lolipop.Now,I'm telling a joke to you,It's very short.
首先求个初一新生一般都听得懂的很简短的笑话
然后,帮忙修改一下我上面那段英文,主要修改,语法错误,用词错误,还有,能用更简单的词表达就帮忙修改一下（修改处,用中文表示,如果可以,就再写下为什么要修改）谢谢
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and my English name.的and是多余的 舍去最好.笑话：Teacher:Why are you late for school every morning?Tom:Every time I come to the corner,a sign says,"School-Go slow".老师:为什么你每天早晨都迟到?汤姆:每...