英语作文 今天必须解决My new flat6-8句话提示词:move,modern,nice facilities,highrise,three bedrooms,housing estate,a large sitting room,the public transport,open space,tennis court注意:词汇不要太难我想问一下We all very like him,这句话对吗我觉得挺正确答案却说是错的为什么呀

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英语作文 今天必须解决
My new flat
6-8句话
提示词:move,modern,nice facilities,highrise,three bedrooms,housing estate,a large sitting room,the public transport,open space,tennis court
注意:词汇不要太难
我想问一下We all very like him,这句话对吗
我觉得挺正确
答案却说是错的
为什么呀

My New Flat
Today we got our new flat from the housing estate company. It has three bedrooms and a large sitting room with highrise roof. And there are many modern and nice facilities in the kitchen. The community is great as well. The public transport is veryconvenient. The open space is quite big, even there is a tennis court. I like it so much, and we will move in soon.

I moved to a new housing estate.It has many modern highrises and nice facilities.For example , tennis court de transpot are open to the public.And there is a lot of space in my house.Our
new house has there bedrooms and a large sitting room.

My new flat
I was so glad that I moved into my new flat in a highrise that located in a modern housing estate last sunday afternoon. Everything is fresh in there and my heart is full with happiness. There are nice facilities , three bedrooms and a large sitting room.The public transport is very convenient to the center of our city. My most favor is that a high-class tennis court is seated in our open space.
So, I can play tennis with my friend after class.It's really my dreaming place.
难的词汇我一个也没用,如果觉得句子复杂些的话,就把它拆开来。现在的小孩呀,不得了。都用这么先进的招了。

I move into a modern flat, it is a highrise, there are lots of new facilities in my flat, and it have three badrooms, two kitchens, two bathroom and a large sitting room. And there many entertainment place nearly, for example, open space, tennis court. The servise of housing estate is very good here. I really love my new flat.

写惯400词作文的.来尝试尝试哈哈~回味一下初中生的味道.貌似应该不要复杂句型的是吧?
I have moved to my mew flat for one week.I love my new flat because the facilities in the flat are modern and nice.My flat located in a highrise,and it is a beautiful housing estate.My new flat has three bedrooms and a large sitting room.The public transportations are just near my new flat.In my housing estate,there is large open space and a tennis court.

Highrises, nice facilities, and a fountain! These jumped into my eyes when I get out of the car. This is my new neighbourhood, and my new flat with a tennis court downstairs is among these modern estates. There is a large sitting room, three bedrooms, two bathrooms and a kitchen in my new flat. The public transportation here is very convenient. I've fallen in love with my new flat!