帮我看看我的英语作文好吗小伙伴们上次没写好被老师一通骂,唉.语法希望帮我指出来,能添加什么好句子也指出来吧,preparing a picnicpicnic is a pleasure trip in which food is taken to be eaten somewhere outdoors.it can be on the beach,on the river bank or in the park.this weekend i will go to the beach with my good friends for a picnic.it's so exciting.we should first prepare necessary food,including mest,bread,drinks and so on.we can buy some chicken wings,some crisps and some hamburgers in the supermarket or

帮我看看我的英语作文好吗小伙伴们
上次没写好被老师一通骂,唉.语法希望帮我指出来,能添加什么好句子也指出来吧,
preparing a picnic
picnic is a pleasure trip in which food is taken to be eaten somewhere outdoors.it can be on the beach,on the river bank or in the park.this weekend i will go to the beach with my good friends for a picnic.it's so exciting.
we should first prepare necessary food,including mest,bread,drinks and so on.we can buy some chicken wings,some crisps and some hamburgers in the supermarket or in the noshery.we can buy some fruit from the market,such as apples,oranges,bananas.but bananas are always easy to go bad,so i buy some oranges.my friend likes bread so i will buy some too.but i will buy some breadafter seven o'clock.at this time the bread will be cheaper.
picnics are exciting.i hope that the weekend can be coming soon.
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