麻烦帮看一下我写的这篇作文有那些语法错误,我是新手,
问题描述：
麻烦帮看一下我写的这篇作文有那些语法错误,我是新手,
If I have 5 million RMB,what would i deal with it?
If I have 5 million RMB,it is hard to say what I would do,Maybe I can change my life,At first,I would buy a big house for my family.And,I would biring my whole family have a holiday,Then,I'll make a study plan and acquire as more training as possible,I think I don't have the capability to manger the large amount money,At last,I have to go to work.There are so many friends in the company.
答
第一行Maybe前面的逗号改成句号,At first前面的逗号改成句号.
第二行bring改成take,family后面加to.
第三行more改成much,possible后面的逗号改成句号.
第四行manager改成manage,At前面的逗号改成句号.
注意：逗号后面的句子第一个词小写,句号后面的句子第一个词要大写.