SAT improving sentences题~

问题描述:

SAT improving sentences题~
Many changes occurred when she was the president of the (college,and they increased its educational quality as well as effectiveness.)
为什么要改成college; these changes increased the educational quality and effectiveness of the college

原句代词指代不明(他们提高了它的教学质量和效率)
they用来指many changes(用they不指人的情况很少见了吧);后面的its指college(如果不仔细读,不知道its指什么,就像中文里面常有的语法错误)
改了以后,句子清楚了许多:
这些改变提高了教学质量和大学的效率.