帮我看看有没有语病!有的话指出来,马上要!能帮我提点意见也行,感激不尽啊!好的话我加分,
帮我看看有没有语病!有的话指出来,马上要!能帮我提点意见也行,感激不尽啊!好的话我加分,
My pet
My pet is a lovely cat.I like it very much.It's very beautiful.
Lovely cat with two small ears,looks like tiangle.It with two biue eyes.In the evening,will shine.It has many white feather.It;s tail is long and thin.
It always"Miao Miao",looksvery cute.My sister likes it very much,so sisteralways play with it.
Oh.fergot to tell you.my pet name is feifei.
还是有一些常见的错误的.我帮你改了,你看看.
My pet
My pet is a lovely cat.I like it very much.It's very beautiful.
My lovely cat has two small ears which look like tiangle(这个词我不认识呵）.It has two biue eyes.In the evening,they will shine.It has many white feathers.Its tail is long and thin.
It always"Miao Miao",and looks very cute.My sister likes it very much,so she always plays with it.
Oh.forget to tell you.my pet's name is feifei.
哪里不懂的可以问我