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有没有句型以及语法错误
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Hello,everyone.My name is XX and I’m very glad to see you all here.I’m a typical Leo girl.I like sunflowers,I like sunshine,and I like sunflower-like smile that always turns towards the sun and never gives up in tears.I love to smile and to laugh.I’m always brave to pursue my love.I dare to love and hate and always stick at my dream even when I suffer misfortune and pain.
I like a singer,Zeng Yike,because she is very like of us nowadays,including me,who always fight for our dreams.
This is just me,an optimistic,brave and determined Leo girl.Hope you can like me and we can make friends.Thanks.