谁能帮我批片雅思作文.

谁能帮我批片雅思作文.
There is much discussion nowadays as to whether or not to fixed punishments for different kinds of commit crime.Diverse contributing factors can be identified.Personally,the circumstance of an individual crime,and the motivation for crime should play an indispensable role in criteria.
Firstly,fixed punishment will have deterrent effects on society,and it is entirely inequitable to punish criminals.The benefit is that fixed legal punishment acted as a deterrent role in the censorship.Contrary,the risk is that punish criminals fully in accordance with the law which disregard the fairness and lose humanization.A typical example can be found in the law case,a law-breaker was just use justifiable defense to treat the thief,now that generally the harsh realistic are directly linked the criminals to the im*ment.Consequently,we must take the scope of individual factors into consideration.
Secondly,it is unquestionably tired to signify that the criminal personal situation should be taken into account.Therefore sending criminals to * is not an effective way to deal with them,and as far as I can see,we should according to their different criminal motive to determine what kind of punishment we should to reform the criminals and overlook the special case.To do so certain significance was avoided to stir some conflicts.
In conclusion,I once again expound my position is moderate,it is necessary to strengthening the government supervision.In brief,to determine the criminals whether or not be guilty of personal situation into consideration range.Therefore,the government needs not only to revise the law but also pay attention to individual situation.