求四级作文高手看看这篇文章
求四级作文高手看看这篇文章
Overseas studying In recent years,overseas studying is very popular.More and more people go abroad to study for various reasons.Why so many people like overseas studying?Becasuse there are better environment and advanced knowledge overseas.For this phenomenon ,different people have different opinions.Many people insist that go abroad to study can make them study more advanced knowledge and improve their practical ability.On the other hand,some people consider that the knowledge in our country is advanced enough.In my opinion,overseas studying is beneficial.Because studying abroad will make students get great improvement in their subjects.And it not noly improve their knowledge ,but also their practical ability.Besides,students can tough different customs.But,if you don't have enough money for overseas studying ,it'doesn't matter.Because the most important factor in yourself.
1、第十行,go abroad to study 应该为going abroad to study.2、Many people insist that go abroad to study can make them study more advanced knowledge 中,study应该为learn.3、And it not noly improve their knowledge ,but also their practical ability.中,应改为：And it improves not noly their knowledge ,but also their practical ability.4、Besides,students can tough different customs中tough 应改为touch 5、最后一句Because the most important factor in yourself.不知要表达什么,可能漏了is.总体上说,水平一般,没有让人拍案叫绝的地方.中国味道太浓.不过,四级这种水平也能说得过去,不会拉太多得分.我最多最多打9分.