我写的一篇雅思作文有谁能帮我修改一下?

我写的一篇雅思作文有谁能帮我修改一下?
题目是一个好的关系在国家间是很重要.你同意还是不同意?你们有谁可以帮我修改一下!
我作文真的是很烂
In nowdays.The development of the world are changed rapidly.all the country are forward the globalization.the first request in globalization is ask all the country
Must help each other.at the risk of the issue too directly,the advantage always more than disadvantage.the reasons are presented below.
In simple.the good relationship between the country is same to the good relationship between the friend,the current econmic crisis,in which no country can stand alone.
besides,the point of science is for a betterment of human life domestic or foreign,if the country help together and work together,every country and every one can benefit form each other.
In addition Let us consider another aspect of this phenomeoon.if each country only for their own benefit.we wii didn’t know the western medicial,the advance technology.The Olympic Games will not be successful,Wenchuan earthquake reconstruction will not so fast ,what is more,we even don’t know the interent ,so many reason can proved the good relationship can stimulate the progress.
From the above comparison and contrast,every one can safely conclude that the good relationship between different is important,and we know we should do something to keep the relationship,Do its a little bit of strength,all the world is one family.