第一题的要求是:Revise these sentence to state their meaning in fewer words.Avoid passive voice,needless repetition,and wordy ph
第一题的要求是:Revise these sentence to state their meaning in fewer words.Avoid passive voice,needless repetition,and wordy phrases and clauses
1Some people believe in capital punishment,while other people are against it;there are many opinions on this subject.
2The subjects that are considered most important by students are those that have beenshown to be useful to them after graduation.
3A campus really was attended by more than a thousand students.Five students were arrested by campus police for disorderly conduct,while several others are charged by campus administrators with organizing a public meeting without being issued a permit to do so.
4Trouble is caused when people disobey rules that have been established for the safety of all.
5It is expected that the new schedule will be announced by the bus company within the next few days.
1 There are many opinions on the subject that some people believe in capital punishment,while others against it.
2 The subjects considered most important are those have shown useful to students after their graduation.
3 A campus had a thousand odd students,five of which were arrested for disorderly conduct,while several others were charged with organizing a public meeting without permission.
4 Trouble is caused when people disobey rules established for the safety.
5 The schedule is expected to be announced by the bus company in a few days.