英语做文章帮忙

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英语做文章帮忙
请补充我不会写的~和改我写错的 请注意我写的时态 在词句方面如果我用的勉强可以的话 请不要改用别的词
因为今天外婆生病了.
我去了杭州人民医院
I went go HangJhou people hospital
那时妈妈不在这,爸爸也外出了
My mother was not here now .Father does gone out too
我就代替他们照顾外婆
I go their works
我从护士们那里拿来了外婆的中饭
I take 外婆's 中饭 away from nurses
这些(工作)非常忙~又好辛苦啊
these were(was是第一人称 were是复数形式 )very busy and what 辛苦 am I
但我的心却很热 这正是给予外婆的爱
But I heart was very hot It just 外婆 for love

因为今天外婆生病了.
Because my grandma is sick today.
(grandma = 外婆,sick = 生病)
我去了杭州人民医院
I went to the People's Hospital of HangZhou
那时妈妈不在这,爸爸也外出了
My mother was not here at the time,and father had gone out too.
(那时 = at the time)
我就代替他们照顾外婆
I'm taking care of their gramdma for them.
(taking care = 照顾)
我从护士们那里拿来了外婆的中饭
I brought my grandma's lunch from the nurses
(拿来 = bring,从某某人那里拿来某某东西是:Brought sthing from someone)
这些(工作)非常忙~又好辛苦啊
These (jobs) are very busy and tiring.
(工作 = jobs.忙 = busy,幸苦 = tiring)
但我的心却很热 这正是给予外婆的爱
But my heart is very warm,because of my love for my grandma.
(在这里不用 hot,用 warm 更适合点)
楼主,我不是故意想改变你翻译的那些词.
只是很多句子,根本就不通.对不起了.
如果我用了新的词,我帮你把意思写了出来.