这句话语法对吗?如何改正..表达更加清楚!

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这句话语法对吗?如何改正..表达更加清楚!
it offered means to improve a positive workplace relation as a win-win situation.

what it offered means to make a better and positive situation of the workplace ,as a win-win situation.
它的意思是创造一个,像双赢一样的,更加好而积极的工作环境.
这样应该不乱了 而且要表达的意思都在里面了~