帮忙看看这句英文有没有语法错误,Have a inquiring mind,published several articles about marketing on periodicals during college years.勤思考,在校期间在期刊上发表了若干关于营销的文章.请大家仔细检查下有没有错误,

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帮忙看看这句英文有没有语法错误,
Have a inquiring mind,published several articles about marketing on periodicals during college years.
勤思考,在校期间在期刊上发表了若干关于营销的文章.
请大家仔细检查下有没有错误,

Have an inquiring mind , not a inquiring mind

首先 第一句应该是"an"不是"a"
另外 如果你说成marketing on的话会被误解成关于什么的市场营销 其它没有问题
以上纯属个人意见 请参考一下!

1.最好加上主语:I have ...
2.a inquiring mind -> an inquiring mind
3.published 前加上 and I
其它没问题了.
全句:I have an inquiring mind,and I published several articles about marketing on periodicals during college years.

having a ````````who published?!?!