英语高手帮我看看有没有语法问题..要是有的话请帮我改正过来,一定要改正确哦..

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英语高手帮我看看有没有语法问题..要是有的话请帮我改正过来,一定要改正确哦..
The present society,different people have different hobbies.For example:singer.Like singing,like painting painter,dancer like dancing ...
In middle school,many people have their own hobbies,like to play computer games,reading magazines,books,and sports.
Good hobbies are good for us.My hobby is reading,though very boring,but in learning is really helpful.
But all of the interest is a waste of time,but as long as we make a reasonable time arrangement,or right.
Hobbies can bring happiness,in boring when they listen to music,read a magazine when tired.Can make us very happy.
So,anyone to have true love,because it will make life more perfect!

The present society前面加个insinger,dancer都要加slike to play computer games换成such as playing.though it`s very boring, but in learning it is really helpful.but as long as we make a reasonable .but去...