中翻译英:"请您审核一下用黄色做标示的这些地方是否正确,还有其他地方是否需要修改"

问题描述:

中翻译英:"请您审核一下用黄色做标示的这些地方是否正确,还有其他地方是否需要修改"

Would you please check out whether those with yellow markers are correct,and whether other parts in need to be revised.