写一篇英语高中生作文.附带一个对作文内容的提问.

There is an old saying which goes that no pains,no gains.There is no doubt that no one can succeed without effort.
Take myself as an example.There is a time when I was thirteen years old.I always dream of achieve the value of my life.However,I was adddicted to playing computergames,because of which made my grades decreased.Oneday I suddenly realized that it was entertainment that had my embittion gone.So I began to study hard.I found it was so hard to catch others.Fortunately,I got it because unusual efforts.
Anyway,he laughs best who laughs last.We shouldn't stop our step in our life.你是哪的。。别等等就是我英语老师那我就惨了。放心，我只是一个高中学生。