这段英文有什么语法错误么?

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这段英文有什么语法错误么?
Hi,Bro!Day Dreamer's comin,I thought that u r a sunshine boy,but after my reading ur words in the space,I found another Wen who has a soft & tender heart.BTW,The girls in ur album is very pretty,

The girls in ur album is very pretty girl干嘛加s