Nothing to say!

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Nothing to say!
As time fly,since last 22 months,we‘ve met each other on the internet.
I never have such strong feeling that I can't survive without
you.Do you know there have a lot of misunderstandings between you
and me.I still remembered last time you told me it's over.When I heard that
unfortunate news.I just feltmy life was coming to the end.
The love are so broken.Did you still remember you said you will marry me no matter what happen to us.But now,you throw out your word as the rubbishes.How dare you!You make me pay a lot
patient on this short trip.We all pay the true love to us. Why you give it up so easily.
Even though,you think it's not worth you paying that.Actually we've payed it.You are so forgettable,you lose me!You lose yourself.We said we will never give it up,but you drop it.I really don't have enough brave to love my next,the day get dark,the cloud get low,How can I get down the road without you.I missed you,I still miss you!I loved you,I still love you!
I was drunk since I met you!I know it's impossible to make you come back.But I still think you will come back for me.These days I dreamed about you,you were full of my dream.Tears,you will never see them on my face again.I just hope only the happiness exist on in your memory.
As you know,you are the first girl that makes me fall in love river.It is my true love
During these days,Igetalot.But at the same time,I lost a lot.What the precious i lost is you.I hate myself,I hate I can't give you my word!I can't give you the marriage you wished.Sorry,I am very sorry that for you, for all your waitings ,your true feelings,your precious ages.
Before the holidays,I told you I will be Guangzhou for you.As Imentioned,I got here.The fact is bad,you reject all my connections.How I wish I can meet you here.Your place!But you make it broken,you destroyed all,all my wishes,all my dream!I know it's not your fault,you just wanna escape,escape from the last love. Yes,it's over!All the happiness are coming to the end!
In all that,I must give it up.Last,thank you.Thanks that you make me grown up,make me strong.May you have a nice marriage,may the god bless you for good and all.My darling,I will never meet you again!
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是As time flies
The love are so broken改成The love has broken吧
You make me pay a lot patient 中patient改为patience
不过写的真好啊.Did you still remember you said you will(would) marry me no matter what happened to us.We all(both) pay the true love to us(each other).I really don't have enough brave(braveness) to love As you know,you are the first girl that makes me fall in love river.(river去掉,fall in love就是坠入爱河)It is my true love改成you are my true loveWhat the precious i lost is you.(改成What the most precious i lost is you.),I hate I can't give you my word!(改成I hate I can‘t come into your world我不能进入到你的世界来更好吧)All the happiness are(is) coming to the end!Thanks that you make me grown up,(Thanks that you let me grow up)make me strong(后面再加strong enough to forget you,my last love)May you have a nice marriage,may the god bless you for good and all(两个may改成wish)尽力了,结尾再写的温存点吧,那么决绝干嘛谢谢了