刚写了一份英语简历,请看看这段有那些错误
刚写了一份英语简历,请看看这段有那些错误
TNC co.,JAPAN owned the wholly factory,it produces watchcases and fixes the TNC watch.When I working of the factory,my mostly job is used VISI-CAM and CNC,made new sample watchcases by the customers required appearance,contrived the new watchcase's design parameter and machining process and plot drawing.
I have participated in a discussion to advance productive efficiency.I given some reasonable advices,found the file of manage equipment and improved productivity.
TNC co.,JAPAN owns the wholly factory,and it produces watchcases and fixes the TNC watch.When I worked for the factory,most parts of my job are using VISI-CAM and CNC,making new sample watchcases by the customers required appearance,contriving the new watchcase's design parameter and machining process and plot drawing.
I have participated in a discussion to advance productive efficiency.I gave some reasonable advices,foundeded the files of manage equipment and improved productivity.