帮忙看一下这句话有没语法错误或是用词不当
问题描述：
帮忙看一下这句话有没语法错误或是用词不当
Magic helped me to find you in a big crowd, but I can not see through your heart.
答
Magic helped me to find you in the big crowd,yet I cannot see through your heart.
用yet表示转折,表示“尚且,却”,can not 要连写.