达人帮我看下这句话有语法错误吗?怎么表达更恰当更地道呢?

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达人帮我看下这句话有语法错误吗?怎么表达更恰当更地道呢?
The quotation is in attachment and if i can know your idea is a better way because our product always depends on clients's require

应该没错。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。