翻译（汉译英感谢那些对我文章做出评价的人,谢谢你们指出的不足和给予的建议!

I am grateful to you who kindly make comments on my essay.
Thank you for your suggestions and the flaws you found.以后有翻译就找你了！翻译的很好谢谢哦~~说的我心里美滋滋的~~以后帮定你啦！~~