求批改英语作文

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求批改英语作文
Should SchoolSuspend Troublesome Student
1.以约30词简要概括新闻内容
2.然后以约120词谈谈你的观点,内容包括:
(1)你是否支持该校长做法,并陈述理由;
(2)假设你是学校校长,谈谈你讲如何处理违纪学生,并陈述理由.
The passage said that a headmastersuspended many troublesome students so as to punish them.As a result,hisschool get benefit for it and shows excellent performance in academic.
As far as I’m concerned,I am in favor ofthe opinion that David Hayes suspended students to punish their bad behavior.It goes without saying that everyone makes mistake in their life and has somebad behavior,but we should stop them and correct them.
If I were the headmaster Iwould call the troublesome students to the playground and let them run aroundthe track until they realize their wrong activities.For one thing,thestudents pay the price for their bad behavior.For another,they can improvetheir physical fitness

Change As a result to there for . What the hell are you trying to say about "it goeswithout saying" reward it . For one thing change to in addition. Your last sentence is not a conclusion change to ...