02 As is apparently demonstrated in the picture above,a young American girl is smiling and wearing
02 As is apparently demonstrated in the picture above,a young American girl is smiling and wearing
英语作文,帮我看看有没有语法错误和用词不当的,以及怎样修改,我对你的感激如同滔滔江水,绵绵不绝……
As is apparently demonstrated in the picture above,a young American girl is smiling and wearing traditional Chinese dress and ornaments.Obviously,the costume has added oriental charm to her beautiful appearance.
The implied meaning which is conveyed in the picture can be briefly stated in the following two aspects.To begin with,culture is not only national,but also international.The worldwide economic globalization has enhanced exchanges between different cultures in such a way as the inflow and outflow of talents over national boundaries.What's more,from her smile,we can see that our national culture can be accepted by the whole world.A unique culture can be accepted by the international society when its distinctive features are fully expressed.With furthering reform and opening up,my country has made tremendous strides on the road to modernization and social progress.The Chinese people have changed old China,poor and backward into socialist new china with the beginning,of prosperity.
Our national culture,which represents our national spirit,is deeply rooted in our tradition.As a developing country with an ancient civilization and her splendid national culture,China should make greater contributions to human beings.Only in this way can we build up a harmonious world.
这篇还好,注意句子不要太长