If you do not jump from the 15th floor died,that person's life will be very brave!这句话有错吗?

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If you do not jump from the 15th floor died,that person's life will be very brave!这句话有错吗?
原来意思是,如果一个人从15楼跳下,他的余生将变得无比的勇敢!

把do not和died去掉,这句话就完美了