自己写了个小短文,错误多多,并指出错误的原因,为何错了,

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自己写了个小短文,错误多多,并指出错误的原因,为何错了,
a bored neighbor
There was a bored old man who was a bored and crazy people in my district.My home was at No.18 and he was at No.22 beside my
home.perhaps you'll ask me this reason why I call him a bored neighbor.In fact,He have become a crazy people.
When we all have already go into dream,This old man standed alone on his veranda after 24:00.After The man began call loudly!
Because he have some accent,I can't understand all of his words.but I can understand he was scolding country,*
Party,community ,etc...The man called 1 hour al least every night...The man have already called for three months...
Perhaps community was not justness to him and he can have a lot of complaint.But he shoundn't effect our rest.he shouldn't only
thought his feel himself.
But we have no idea.Because he could be a crazy people...
I wish Who could send him to go to the madhouse...

你写得不错.我帮你修改了些英文习惯的用法.如果你能自己比较一下或是找出不同的地方,那样你的英文就会进步更大.希望下次能写些正面的文章.写些好人的故事.你这个故事给我来写,我可能会写成"一个无助的人"想想那老人...