每一句的语法.

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每一句的语法.
styles show who you are,but they also creat sterotypes and distance between groups.for intstance,a businessman might look at a boy with green hair and multiple piercings as an outsider .but to another person,the boy is a strict conformist.he dresses a certain way to deliver the message of rebellion and separation ,but within that group,the look is uniform.how we accept or reject a style is in fact how we react to the society we live in.

大致看了一下,感觉有些词用得不符合语境,同时语法略有瑕疵styles在这里换成Personality也许好一些,stereotype换成bias,strict换成typical,conformist不知你想表达什么,但是不妥;deliver一般用于传统意义上的“送,给...这是课文,就是解释一下结构和有那些语法,急急急!!